I was doing something romantically appealing to my target market. As I reached the peak of achievement, I had an inspiration: make a product people will like.In generic form it sounds completely fatuous, but consider the following real example of the genre meant to wash right over an uncritical reader:
A former bakery owner and professional bicyclist, he was choking down PowerBars for energy in the middle of a daylong 175-mile ride. "I couldn't make the last one go down, and that's when I had an epiphany -- make a product that actually tasted good."This is a very carefully crafted story. It has the simplicity, economy, and punch of a Reader's Digest anecdote. Some talented marketers probably spent hundreds of hours polishing it. Each of the 45 words it contains pulls its weight. Notice in it the three key elements of a founding story:Gary Erickson, founder and CEO of Clif Bar.
Quoted in Fortune Small Business, October 2003
- A quest which is romantically appealing to the target market,
- An epiphany,
- A trivial and obvious idea claimed as original.
After setting the stage, the story delivers the punch line. The trivial, obvious idea presented as novel, original, and ingenious. Make food that tastes good. If the idea was an epiphany for him, I'm just glad I never ate at his bakery. But the more trivial and obvious the idea is, the better the story sounds. Ideas like "make food that tastes good," or "write software that's powerful yet easy to use," or "design clothes that make people look their best," are powerful positive messages. And the implicit negative message about the competition stays in the reader's mind too.
Presumably, Erickson has done clever things to make his product successful. The true big idea is something along the lines of, "make energy bars out of rice, soy and oats with cane juice flavoring instead of refined sugar, put pictures of athletes on them and sell them in sporting goods shops instead of supermarkets." That was a winning combination and he deserves wealth for having made it work. But it sure doesn't read well.